Hey Mambo! Mambo Italiano!

Ciao bella!
Sto practicando mia scrittura di italiano. Mi dispiace se è insatto. Per favore correggermi se lei vuole. Non parlo molto Italiano, ma proverò. :)
Sono solitaria perche la mia roomate non non è qui. È a un Anime Convention. Signora Fortunata!!!
Ho bisogno di comprare un giubbotto. Fa freddo qui!
Oggi sono andato solo una volta a fuori della mia stanza - a mangiare! Ho mangiato il Cinese Hot-Pot stasera. Era delizioso.

What I wanted to say/Translation:
Hey yall! I'm practicing my Italian writing. I'm sorry if it is wrong. Please correct me if you want. I don't speak a lot of Italian, but I'll try. I'm lonely because my roommate is not here. She is at an anime convention. Lucky Lady!!! I need to buy a coat. It's cold here. I went outside my room only once - to eat. I ate Chinese Hot Pot tonight. It was delicious.

I probably got a lot of phrases wrong and translated them in my head too directly. :P  I sound like a noob because I am a noob! I can (attempt to) talk a lot about food, clothing, furniture and personalities. I can also (attempt to) talk in present tense, past tense, and present progressive. Yay skool!

As yall know, I'm obsessed with capes. I found a somewhat affordable cape - and it's Duke Blue(ish). It is not really a coat, but I do like it and I think it may get the job of keepin-me-warm done.

I like this cape too. It is also somewhat affordable and it has more structure than the last one. Wish it was blue though. Meh.

I also found a neat cape dress.

Leopard Cape Dress
$68 - shopnastygal.com
Dresses »

Misses Caped Tweed Coat with Double-Breasted Styling - Grey
$129 - spiegel.com
Gray coat »

Madeline Wool Cape | NASTY GAL | Jeffrey Campbell shoes, Evil Twin,...
$130 - shopnastygal.com

What do you think?